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I tried to find something I can enjoy different colors. I edited pictures to express difference of each color though some don't have so many. The last picture #15 is to celebrate my good friend's colorful life.
Hello! I love the composition of all of you pictures. It's nice that there isn't a lot going on in most of your photos. I don't know if you consciously went for a red and blue theme for your photos but it works really here. The colors pop a lot. That adds to the photos and make them look really positive in terms of mood or style. My favorite picture from your set is picture #3. The way you shot it to make the elevators look like the were through the wall is great.
ReplyDeleteHello! I love the composition of all of you pictures. It's nice that there isn't a lot going on in most of your photos. I don't know if you consciously went for a red and blue theme for your photos but it works really here. The colors pop a lot. That adds to the photos and make them look really positive in terms of mood or style. My favorite picture from your set is picture #3. The way you shot it to make the elevators look like the were through the wall is great.
ReplyDeleteReally nice pictures! Like our professor said, I think we all forgot to add a little bit of mystery to our photos because we were focused on color, but you hit both.
ReplyDeleteThe construction of your photos vary, which is nice because you have some shots that are dead on, some from above, etc. - they're not all the same.
There is a lot of red going on in your photos, so when it comes to color, that's what your photos are communicating you're drawn to the most. I think this is a fun realization! I'm super intrigued by number 6, though. I'm not sure if it's the way you edited it, or if it's actually what I'm thinking it is, but it looks like it was taken underwater in a pool. Either way, the blue hue and blurry perspective make me wonder what's happening here.
Conceptually, some of your photos are very a-day-in-the-life, too, both good and bad occurrences. It seems like you live a naturally colorful life through the activities you participate in.
My favorite photo is #3 - I love everything about it. You came across a reflective wall and used it to serve as a type of overlay to the photo. With the colors and the pattern, it makes the scene look mysterious, and chromatic.
Hi Mayuko, I loved these photos. Your construction is great. All the photos are very large, and they're centered and spaced evenly on your blog. Your communication is awesome. A few photos, such as numbers 6 and 7, had me questioning what they were. You were able to focus on color while also maintaining the mystery aspect. Your conception is also great. You brought out the color of things that we often overlook or don't appreciate. My favorite is number 14, because its shows how many different shades of one color there can be.
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ReplyDeleteThe construction was good, everything was centered and numbered. You use a lot of spacing though, I think you could lessen it. Unless you're trying to make it so only one photo is shown when scrolling, then maybe try adding more?
Your communication was good, although I have no idea what #6 is. I like the photo regardless though.
Your conception was great. You took photos of things that were important to you and cool things you saw around on your normal day. You focused a lot on blue and red objects.
My favorite photo is #1. It caught my attention when you first posted it. I love water/rain on glass photos. I wish it was larger, but the rain streams and drops really change what the photo would have been.
Hello Mayuko,
ReplyDeleteYour pictures and numbers are centered. You have a variety of vertical and horizontal pictures. I see a lot of reds. Your first picture in blue is beautiful. You have a combination of pictures from inside and outside. The way you captured some of your pictures made everyday objects look unusual. That is what I think you were trying to convey. It all in how we look at things.
Hey Mayuko! You took some cool pictures this week. Your Construction is great. Your photos are centered, evenly spaced, and numbered. Your Communication, was well done. I like the city vibe in some of your photos. It was like following you throughout your day. It made it interesting to look through your blog. As far as Conception, it was really good. I like the variety of angles and distances. Your variety of color was great (pops of color in a photo versus a fully colorful photo). I also like your use of objects between you and the subject, for example: the gate between you and the cat or the glass between you and the building. It gave a really cool extra layer of interest in you pictures. It was hard to decide but, my vote for Picture of the Week goes to #1. Like I said, glass between you and the building make the photo even better. I love the streaks of water; it draws my eye around the picture. I also like the monochromatic feel with the overall blue color. Great job this week!
ReplyDeleteHey Mayuko,
ReplyDeleteYour construction this week was perfect – everything was numbered, evenly spaced, and centered.
You communicated a lot of these photos effectively, but some of the conceptual elements within them, especially with the addition of the filters left a bit to be desired; some pictures read as a bit overtly and unintentionally generic for my liking. That said, I really loved some of the more ambiguous photographs, which is why my favorite was #1.