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Recipe: I used VSCO cam, Pixlr, and the image adjustments
within the iPhone camera to edit these photos. To make the colors more vibrant,
I adjusted things like saturation, contrast, and brightness. I tried to capture
every color in the rainbow.
Hi Annie!
ReplyDeleteform - Wish I could see horizontal pictures! Pictures are numbered, centered, and it is wonderful you wrote what app you used for editing and what kind of editing you actually did. However you need to upload more pictures and two self-portrait. Picture #4's explanation has a bigger "adjust" lol
content - You chose great contents for this blog to express colorful world. Probably you can find many more objects, not the actual arts by others.
impact - Picture #1's impact is BIG. Something we see in our daily life but when you get closer to it you can find some impact! Picture #6 has a good impact on the ceiling part. Between each color there is some small blur which makes the impact softer. GOOD!
I like picture #1 because that could be taken during your cooking??? Your own art!
Hi Annie! Cool photos this time. I like how each photo is a different subject and filled with color. You got the rainbow in half your photos. You got good composition on most of your photos. Some of them could be framed better but who am I to say. My favorite photo from your set is #6. That ceiling is striking.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie! Cool photos this time. I like how each photo is a different subject and filled with color. You got the rainbow in half your photos. You got good composition on most of your photos. Some of them could be framed better but who am I to say. My favorite photo from your set is #6. That ceiling is striking.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie,
ReplyDeleteThe construction was good, everything was numbered, spaced, and centered correctly.
Your communication was good, the photos were about your everyday life and I could see that from the cooking photo and objects that must be around your apartment.
Your conception was great. You had a lot of bright yellow in your photos, I noticed it almost immediately. You might not have done that on purpose, but I like it.
My favorite photo is #6. It's very colorful and attentive and goes with the paintings on the side of the hallways.
Your construction is good. All of the pictures and numbers are centered. They are of things familiar to you, even down to the cucumbers in the refrigerator, and your pictures are full of color. The crayons are a cute example of our assignment. Though every photo was not from your home, your pictures prove that color can be found in items from everyday life.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite picture was #1. There's a cake in the making.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie! For your construction, all of your pictures are numbered, evenly spaced, and centered. However, I wish your pictures were a larger. For your communication, all of your pictures were easy to read, but I like all of the different angles that you used. I especially like the angle in picture 7 because you can’t tell the length of the flowers because it was taken from an aerial view. For the conception, your pictures all capture a different color or mixture of colors, which is what you were trying to shoot. It looks like you shot most of your pictures in your home and some pictures outdoors. My vote for POW is picture 6 because you were able to capture most, if not all of the colors of rainbow, which is what you were aiming to capture. I like the way the ceiling colors changes gradually. I also like how there are different colors displayed on the outer walls all along the corridor, which incorporate the colors on the ceiling.
ReplyDeleteHi Annie,
ReplyDeleteI liked your pictures this week! Your construction was good, pictures were center and easy to view from one to the next. For communication, I felt like you were trying to communicate that art was a passion of yours and also colorful! For conception, I like each picture and how you did capture each color of the rainbow. My favorite picture this week was, 5. It caught me off guard and pulled me in!
Hey Annie,
ReplyDeleteYou communicated you photographs in an interesting way this week, getting really close up and cropping your subjects pretty universally throughout. I would've liked to see you take more risks with the subject matter, though, to emphasize the color a bit more; there lacked a common theme that linked these photos all together with the topic for the week.
My favorite photo this week was #6. It was the one that struck me most right off the bat, and it really focused in on a few specific colors, despite all the other activity going on around it. I appreciated that.