form - Good you have both horizontal and vertical photographs. However each picture is not numbered or centered. Also I think you have not uploaded 15 pictures at least in total or your self-portraits.
content - The crayon picture is wonderful content to express their colors! A guy holding a coffee cup is a good content, too, especially coffee and the cup's black and white impact, and his jacket got some sunlight and its part has brighter blue.
impact - Balloons and crayons have colors in each picture. The last picture is "mysterious" in the dark and with the green color as we learned some weeks ago.
I like the picture of crayons. Very bright and colorful object!
Howdiedoodie Mary! There's people in your photos! Good job for getting people. The colors are very nice here. They are not that vivid and add to the mood of your pictures which I am guessing is chill but very crazy at the same time. The composition on all of your photos are excellent too. Each photo tells a story and has a life of their own. My favorite photo from your group is the skeleton hand. Very interesting subject and the stories you can make up about that photo are endless.
Howdiedoodie Mary! There's people in your photos! Good job for getting people. The colors are very nice here. They are not that vivid and add to the mood of your pictures which I am guessing is chill but very crazy at the same time. The composition on all of your photos are excellent too. Each photo tells a story and has a life of their own. My favorite photo from your group is the skeleton hand. Very interesting subject and the stories you can make up about that photo are endless.
Your photos always really interest me - they're so different!
For construction, I think the orientation of some of your photos could be adjusted, making them straighter. But visually, I like how your subjects are laid out in each photo.
Your photos remind me of the phrase "a picture's worth 1,000 words," and the Instagram account Humans of New York. Like in photo #6, I imagine a quote under the photo about where she's headed and what the occasion for those balloons is.
Conceptually, I think you're not only trying to show viewers what you see, but what your subjects see as well. You've caught many of life's natural moments using many shots with colors that look unedited, and equally natural.
My favorite photo is #8 because I think it demonstrates how effortlessly, and unintentionally colorful life can be. It also makes me wonder how these colorful tools ended up ruined on the ground, and who they belonged to.
Hello Mary, The construction was okay, the pictures were spaced nicely, but they weren't numbered or centered. Your communication was good. I knew what you were trying to get across and tell us about each photo. Your conception was great. It seems like you tried to include people in your photos unlike most of us. It's different and I liked it a lot. My favorite photo is #4 & #5. They fit together really nicely and look interesting when scrolling by them.
Hi Mary, In some of your pictures it shows you looking at people who are in turn looking at something else. That is a great concept. You have a great variety here. Some pictures are taken at home, your dog for example. The crayons take me back to the cute child in picture #1. Don't forget to center you pictures and numbers. I'm still trying to get that right. You have communicated that what others see is important. I like the picture of the dog in the closet the best. They like to snuggle among our belongings.
Hi! As far as construction, I would have like to see you pictures numbered to make it easier to follow. Your photos this week were very unique! I like how you took objects that are relatively normal and shot them in a way that others wouldn't see. I can tell that you find inspiration in everyday subjects and have a great way of depicting something out of the ordinary. I also like your use of color! I feel like many of your photos wouldn't have given off the same feel if the colors were not there. This is especially apparent in the picture with the crayons, which is my favorite. The way the various colors are spread across the dull concrete really depicts passion to me and opens up to telling a story!
I feel like to better the construction of your photos you could center them and include numbers, but I love how big they all are and draw you in. For communication, I felt like I got a grasp of who you were and what you like - and I'm guessing that is a people person! I enjoyed how a lot of your pictures are of people which is why the picture of the two people and birthday cake is my favorite. The photo focuses on the colorful camera and the emotion of joy shows through. For content, I enjoyed the people in all your photos! I thought it was really well thought out!
Hey Mary, Your construction this week was what threw me off the most; if your pictures had been numbered and centered, I think I would've been more engaged with them. You communicated a lot of interesting things here and really had fun with it. Conceptually, I really appreciated the crayon box. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you're the first person to intentionally and physically construct a subject, rather than just having found objects already existing in a setting; that's mainly why it's my favorite.
Hi Mary!
ReplyDeleteform - Good you have both horizontal and vertical photographs. However each picture is not numbered or centered. Also I think you have not uploaded 15 pictures at least in total or your self-portraits.
content - The crayon picture is wonderful content to express their colors! A guy holding a coffee cup is a good content, too, especially coffee and the cup's black and white impact, and his jacket got some sunlight and its part has brighter blue.
impact - Balloons and crayons have colors in each picture. The last picture is "mysterious" in the dark and with the green color as we learned some weeks ago.
I like the picture of crayons. Very bright and colorful object!
Howdiedoodie Mary! There's people in your photos! Good job for getting people. The colors are very nice here. They are not that vivid and add to the mood of your pictures which I am guessing is chill but very crazy at the same time. The composition on all of your photos are excellent too. Each photo tells a story and has a life of their own. My favorite photo from your group is the skeleton hand. Very interesting subject and the stories you can make up about that photo are endless.
ReplyDeleteHowdiedoodie Mary! There's people in your photos! Good job for getting people. The colors are very nice here. They are not that vivid and add to the mood of your pictures which I am guessing is chill but very crazy at the same time. The composition on all of your photos are excellent too. Each photo tells a story and has a life of their own. My favorite photo from your group is the skeleton hand. Very interesting subject and the stories you can make up about that photo are endless.
ReplyDeleteHi!
ReplyDeleteYour photos always really interest me - they're so different!
For construction, I think the orientation of some of your photos could be adjusted, making them straighter. But visually, I like how your subjects are laid out in each photo.
Your photos remind me of the phrase "a picture's worth 1,000 words," and the Instagram account Humans of New York. Like in photo #6, I imagine a quote under the photo about where she's headed and what the occasion for those balloons is.
Conceptually, I think you're not only trying to show viewers what you see, but what your subjects see as well. You've caught many of life's natural moments using many shots with colors that look unedited, and equally natural.
My favorite photo is #8 because I think it demonstrates how effortlessly, and unintentionally colorful life can be. It also makes me wonder how these colorful tools ended up ruined on the ground, and who they belonged to.
Hello Mary,
ReplyDeleteThe construction was okay, the pictures were spaced nicely, but they weren't numbered or centered.
Your communication was good. I knew what you were trying to get across and tell us about each photo.
Your conception was great. It seems like you tried to include people in your photos unlike most of us. It's different and I liked it a lot.
My favorite photo is #4 & #5. They fit together really nicely and look interesting when scrolling by them.
Hi Mary,
ReplyDeleteIn some of your pictures it shows you looking at people who are in turn looking at something else. That is a great concept. You have a great variety here. Some pictures are taken at home, your dog for example. The crayons take me back to the cute child in picture #1. Don't forget to center you pictures and numbers. I'm still trying to get that right. You have communicated that what others see is important. I like the picture of the dog in the closet the best. They like to snuggle among our belongings.
Hi! As far as construction, I would have like to see you pictures numbered to make it easier to follow. Your photos this week were very unique! I like how you took objects that are relatively normal and shot them in a way that others wouldn't see. I can tell that you find inspiration in everyday subjects and have a great way of depicting something out of the ordinary. I also like your use of color! I feel like many of your photos wouldn't have given off the same feel if the colors were not there. This is especially apparent in the picture with the crayons, which is my favorite. The way the various colors are spread across the dull concrete really depicts passion to me and opens up to telling a story!
ReplyDeleteMary,
ReplyDeleteI feel like to better the construction of your photos you could center them and include numbers, but I love how big they all are and draw you in. For communication, I felt like I got a grasp of who you were and what you like - and I'm guessing that is a people person! I enjoyed how a lot of your pictures are of people which is why the picture of the two people and birthday cake is my favorite. The photo focuses on the colorful camera and the emotion of joy shows through. For content, I enjoyed the people in all your photos! I thought it was really well thought out!
Hey Mary,
ReplyDeleteYour construction this week was what threw me off the most; if your pictures had been numbered and centered, I think I would've been more engaged with them. You communicated a lot of interesting things here and really had fun with it. Conceptually, I really appreciated the crayon box. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you're the first person to intentionally and physically construct a subject, rather than just having found objects already existing in a setting; that's mainly why it's my favorite.